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Right/Wrong?

It's odd,
like a beautifully written story
about something horrible,
that you can do one thing,
one good thing -
- that's dosen't feel good.
Dosen't feel right?
You couldn't look them in the eye.
That was it.
But you did!
Then you looked away.
No,
you did something right,
one thing right,
but not two
or three
or ten
or twenty.
You didn't do enough,
and you know it.
And it hurts.

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Reviews


  • Lake Absence
    October 19, 2008
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    Wow. That was very beautiful!!!! Props. Keep up the great work,

    Lake.


  • rhetorica
    October 21, 2008

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    I like it

    I like this poem a lot,it makes sense to me,unlike most poems i read.It tells the truth,most poems dont tell the truth,but this poem isn`t like most poems,thats why i like it,if thats alright.I hope i haven`t said anything wrong.

    bye.