I once knew a girl named Jill.
I can picture her still.
It was plain for all to see
that she had a crush on me.
It made me feel quite bad
and made her very sad.
There was nothing that I could do
my crush was on her friend Sue.
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True Story.
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Haha, funny. It was cute and funny... Brian, you make us all laugh!
Great job!
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Thank you
I'm glad I could make you smile. Making someone like you smile is the best way to make the world a better place.
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Great job, Brian. xD It's really cute and funny. I had myself feeling sorry for Jill. Now, may I ask who Sue liked? Ha ha.
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Thanks.
That's me, cute and funny. Ok, so not so cute and more like funny looking. That's OK I'm used to it. I'm not sure who Sue had a crush on but I can tell you it wasn't me. So sad.
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Aww shucks :)
This poem made me smile and cringe as I remembered my first crush - our first experience of unrequited love - you captured it simply and beautifully. -
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What can I say?
I'm glad I made you smile, and sorry I made you cringe. Thank you for the compliment.
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Oh wow
i like it
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Thanks
I'm glad you enjoyed. Thanks for letting me know. I appreciate it.
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A love triangle! Oh no!
I think this poem is very cute. I like how your poems are sometimes serious, and sometimes not serious at all. It helps to have variety.
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Thanks
I wrote this for my son to put in a little poetry book he had to make for school. It's true though. Variety is the spice of life. I'm adding even more variety since joing sharepoetry and learning new styles.
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