Protecting nothing within
the stone hearted mighty menace
terrorizes imagination,
penetrates mind and
threatens future.
Warring with surrealism -
imagination shrinks out of pain,
delivers deep feeling of abhorrence of sins.
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Harsh truth
Not a fan of structured or organized religion either. I love this piece. Great wording great imagery and great way to describe the seething mass that is organized religion.
language: 5, rhythm: 4, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 3.
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