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Haiku Jujitsu

Watch me spring, bitch
Haiiiiiii Ya!!
Yelp yelp yelp yelp!!

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  • cee
    November 2, 2008

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    Hahaha! This is funny, I love it!. Except for one thing, A haiku is supposed to have the 5 7 5 thing going on, unless this is a translation from cat&dog or something. And I love the picture!

  • Bailiwick
    November 6, 2008
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    Lol.

    Kudos.


  • tirwander
    November 6, 2008

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    Oi!

    Ok, haha I assume you want no critique though i'd have none to offer. This just made me laugh. I love the picture hehe thanks for posting this! I'm going to be staring at the picture for an hour probably... trying to figure out how that happened... haha