Wilted flower, lament no longer.
Wallow not in your repentance,
but rejoice in your entity.
You are all that is alluring and delicate.
Stretch your fatigued peddles
and grasp the sky.
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Dont feel sorry for yourself,accept and love your wondrous but fragile being,be ready for what comes ahead..this work is great,i could never explain anything in writing with such insight and beauty,the feel,structure,balance and readability of it is just right.
Thanks skyviewexpress
Great work
Bye
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No, thank you rhetorica, for the comment, and insight.
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So much meaning...
with so few words. It's true I've said this before but that does not reduce it's truth. You have used such a beautiful image to express your thoughts. I love the background. It is beautiful. It couldn't be more perfect for this poem.
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Thank you so much for stopping and checking out my new poem! And thank you thank you for the comment. I'm glad you liked it.
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I like the delicate strength of this short poem. The us of the wilted flower stretching out into the sky was a beautiful way of portraying the reclaiming of self and rejoicing in who you are. The brevity of this poem works well for the subject matter. Beautiful poem.
-iphios
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Thank you so much for your comment. This poem is definitely a reclamation. Glad you picked up on that.
-Skyviewexpress
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rhetorica
October 30, 2008