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Secret World

Here
in glorious technicolor
our one-man movies run

here
there are no consequences
only fun
and games

here
there are no buts
(yet there are many)
there is no hesitation
no story to tell
only scenarios to run
it's all good clean
fun
and we cut
straight to the action


here
there are no restraints
only indulgences
freely given
no sinners
only saints

here
is a Heaven
of uninhibited
human interaction

here
the path to Heaven
not to Hell
is made easier
by paving stones
carelessly laid

here
unafraid
we don't hide
we've made our bed
and in it we seek
no rest
just satisfaction

here
things are simple
and gratification comes quick
nobody is ever sick
nobody is ugly
nobody has obligations
nobody needs fulfillment

only distraction

this place doesn't exist
but most of us spend a lot of time

here


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  • rhetorica gold member
    October 30, 2008

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    Where is this place,have you got an address or is it simply delusion city.You are,in my opinion,absolutely right,i meet with these types often,everywhere,they will always be here,i guess they have to be to feed their gullible minds.Exceptional writing from you again,love reading your work,the ending to this changes it completely,but i was anticipating it,only because i knew you wrote it.Anyway,i`m off to say my morning prayers.

    btw, has any of your work been published,i`d buy it,probably because i mostly live THERE not HERE.