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Sunday

Awake and laying
Doing the Sunday crossword
Relaxed on the couch
Never moving but to eat
Needed once a week, oh Sunday

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  • natureangel
    November 5, 2008

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    :)

    Isn't that what Sundays were invented for - you say so much with so few words and expending as little energy as possible which captures the Sunday mood brilliantly!

    Monica

    language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.