Heart of love
Brings only one truth
God is real
Without light
We wonder wildly
Without light
Love is real
Fealt warm in all hearts
Show me love
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hmmm.
i like the first one the best. i like the simple (yet complex) words of "love, truth, and God".
i probably like the middle one the least. i see the alliteration but i am just not a fan of repeating any line twice in a three line poem.
the third one is very nice.
simple, heartfelt, innocent. i love the "show me love" as sort of a quiet pleading. or at least thats how i see it.
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This is pretty!
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