To make the world a better place
what is it I would do?
The first thing that comes to mind
is do something nice for you.
Because if I could make you happy
that might make you smile.
Then the world would be a better place
for at least a little while!
Author notes
For all those I would love to see smile.
Comments
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Very nice and sweet! It's simple and short which makes it "cute" and sincere. It made me smile
and feel happy.
Good job! You really can convey alot in a few words.
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Thank you.
I'm glad you liked it. Since it made you smile it has once again done it's job. I believe that making someone smile or feel happy is is a wonderful thing to do. Sometimes it's not the length of the message but rather the thought or emotion it conveys which lends it it's strength. Thanks again.
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Applaud
That's simple and sweet. Something nice to memorize to say to someone and pretend you made it up and score points. Just kidding. Really, I like this very much. Very sweet and sincere. Good, clean poetry.
Birdie
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Thank you
I'm glad you liked it. I do have it memorized and I quote it from time to time but I've never pretended to have wrote a poem for someone that I had not written for them. It's against my religion. He he he. I'd just make one up for them to score points. Thanks again.
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A place for all to liv
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Thank you
for taking a second to leave me a comment which tells me you read my poem and found some type of meaning in it. A better place for all to live. I agree. Thanks again.
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Brian, guess you write in with a smile that invariably makes the reader smile..you got in the smiling spirit that as someone below said is transmittable and is bound to reflect in the reader as well...
Overall a good sweet attempt
Cheery Cheers
RhythmDivine
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Thank you
There have been many times when the poem I was writing made me smile as I was writing it. I think there is a lot of power in a smile. I do indeed think that they are contagious. Under the right circumstances they spread like wild fire. Thanks again.
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nice one
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Thank you
I appreciate you taking a minute to let me know you liked it. Thanks again.
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Sweet
This is sweet. There is a lot of potential in making one person smile
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Thank you
Smiles are contagious. If you can make one person smile and that one person makes one person smile and...
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Yay, go Burger King.
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Thanks.
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it's nice that sometimes the most simple things can be the most meaningful. if we can place a little of our happiness in others it's bound to create an echo through all the people it touches. it's starts with us, so don't be afraid to show your affections to those you care for
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Thank you,
I agree that sometimes it's the little things in life that make life worth living. I show my affections to complete strangers. I'm a very soft hearted old soul.
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Aw, it's succinct but good! I love it!!!
Great job Brian!!
Hope
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Thanks.
I'm so glad you love it.
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Awe! I like this poem so much it makes me smile to see you care about the happiness of others you should be happy too and smile too smiling is an amazing thing to do it makes the world go around makes the world more happier ^,^ this poem made me smile
keep on the good work
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Thank you
I'm very glad it made you smile. Because if I made you smile this poem did it's job. The world was a better place for at least a little while. I smile every time I hear that one of my poems has made someone smile. How wonderful it is to know that I can make someone happy even for a moment. Thanks again.
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aw!
it's so cute, short, simple, and to the point! I absolutely love it
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Thank you.
I'm so glad you liked it. They don't all have to be complicated to be nice.
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Sweet
Ah, this one was simple. But so true! Thanks for making me smile!
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Thanks
If I made you smile this poem did it's job. The world was a better place for at least a little while.
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