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Zygote

Z is for ZA-SHAM! I just ate your head.
Y is for Yam-eating Burger Kings
G is for 'Grats on your newborn, Brian
O is for OHHHHH! You're a boy. You can't have a baby.
T is for Twelve toes on one foot
E is for ENOUGH! I can't think of anything else.

Author notes

~BKB~ ~LAM~ Or ~HAM~ DON'T LAUGH AT MY REAL INITIALS. http://sharepoetry.com/Brian_Balzer

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  • Enoq
    November 18, 2008
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    Wow

    Fun acrostic. You sure like Brian! Thats cool he is a cool guy. Great piece.

    language: 2, rhythm: 1, subject: 2, tone: 1, form: 5.

  • Brian Balzer Greeters member
    November 11, 2008
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    Too Funny!

    I can read it much better with this background but you need to change it to without a border or use the rich text to make the font small enought that the word baby will be in the line it's supposed to be on. That way your main word lines up correctly. Still funny. And I love that you linked me.


    • Inkling
      November 12, 2008
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      Okay. Thanks for the advice. And linking people is awesome. Especially if you link a person you never even talked to before. *sighs, remembering the memory*

  • Brian Balzer Greeters member
    November 11, 2008
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    What did you do?

    Yes but barely.

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