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Two-Fold Advice

O be careful little ears
For many will prophecy
And their minions will destroy.
Their disguise, they will wear
Humble and meek,those devils.
Evildoers whose purpose
Only to
Deceive the young
Molest their minds

Many do not know of their
Influence. Throwing out their
Advice without a deep thought
O be careful big mouth
For many will eagerly
Listen. With all you say use cation
Make your purpose to become
Only to
Gain thier trust
Enrinch their minds

Author notes

To my peers and those above me. Be careful what you tell those beneath you and be careful listening to those above you.

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  • Brian Balzer Greeters member
    November 14, 2008

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    Excellent Advice!

    Wonderful poem! The message is very powerful. There is so much truth in it. I think I've said this before but you are wise beyond your years. It's too bad that many adults do not posses a fraction of the wisdom which is contained within you. I read this several times and I finally decided the two lines are my favorites:
    Their disguise, they will wear
    Humble and meek,those devils.
    This is so accurate. Most modern day Wolves are usually disguised as Sheep because it makes it so much easier for them to blend in with the flock. I find this to be very insightful. Congratgulations on another fantastic poem. You never cease to impress me.