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Step Up

My mind tells me no
My feelings tell me yes
My heart doesn't have an
Option
Me as a whole wants to
Spit it out
Spit out these toxic,
Painful thoughts
That kill me
Emotionally.
But I am too scared
Too scared to step up
And defeat this battle against
Me, my soul and life
This killer lives in my
Soul my and they kill me
In my heart my soul
Everything
I want to so badly
I just want to yell,
To scream
I want to want to
Kick
To beat
Me
To scream in a
Pillow
My wish to
Forget what had happen
To start over
Refresh life
To step up
Kill my silence
I want to be
Me..

Author notes

Another freewrite.. geez.. I write a lot of freewrites xD

Needs a lot editing!

What to edit???

    : Comment:

Comments


  • Lake Absence
    November 14, 2008

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    I Owe You a Comment

    So I'm getting down to it. Um, yeah. I have trouble commenting unless I have something specific thing to say. So yeah. I think this could have benefitted from some rearranging of breaks. IMHO. You make me so sad...

    Lake.