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"D.D."

Your song-
echoing
Your voice-
flowing
Your eyes-
searching
Your heart-
breaking

All of these
is what
we
call
"Death Disease"








signed by
D.D.

What disease did you have before, that lasted more than a week?

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Comments


  • Lake Absence
    November 15, 2008

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    Heehee...I was there while you were writing this! But it took you awhile didn't it? Well, as JA said, "An artist's work should not be slovenly." Or something like that, I'm not sure. =]

  • Livin.4.God
    November 14, 2008

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    idk.. honestly idk....


    Anyways great poem! Great flow. I love the short lines!! You wrote this very good. Don't know what to say =]

    Hope.