When I let my heart
led the way,
I was stupid to say
ok.
I lost all my
senses
And I'm
defenseless.
You hurt me so much
that I regret
it.
You were so cold to me
that i held it in
Now,
Today,
I don't trust myself,
for my heart
stopped beating by itself.
by
Love Hater
Author notes
This poem is like so true to me. Now I know who my crush use to like, (he told me) and it was one of my friend!!!! Of course, I wasn't angry at my friend. So now, all this time, I held the sadness and anger. LOL!!!! How stupid I am. I hate it. But you know, right now, my body's shaking and i'm laughing and sheading tears at the same time. LOL!!!! I hate this... It hurts my eyes... But as time goes on, I'm seeing the DARK FACE of my crush, th evil face, the one will surely hurt my feeling in PORPUSE... I think I could stop on having a crush on him. But i don't know, i'll think about it.
Isn't this poem what you feel when you're broken-hearted?
Comments
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Aw, Sheena, so sad for you! =[ Well, whoever it is doesn't deserve you. You're great! So cheer up, okay? We need your happy bubbliness; I can't do it all!
Lylas,
Lake. -
Wow, very emotional. It's great. The flow of the poem is perfect. Again I love the short lines.
Hope.
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