That was the night
I saw my brother dead
In the war
It was the night I had the
Dream.
The dream,
A raven
Mocking me
I kept on having visions
And dreams of my brother
Dead
I cried and cried
At the forshadowings
I kept on seeing
He was my hero,
My friend
No one believed me earlier
On past experinces
They would never believe me
Now
Night after night
The raven keeps mocking me
That my brother will get
Killed.
Killed right there,
Somewhere in
France,
On the battleground
God only knows where.
Please, please,
God,
Thomas don't
Fall...
Don't
Die....
Author notes
I was reading "The Forshadowing". It's about this girl who can see parts of the future. She sees the faces of men who will get killed in the war, and one of them is her brother, Thomas. Takes place during WW1 in 1915, England. Will Thomas survive, will he get killed? Not telling, you would have to read the book.
Anyways, please comment!
Thanks,
Hope.
What should be the title?
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I really liked it.
Thank you for the add =]
And i will for sure look for the book.
Thanks !language: 5, rhythm: 4, subject: 4, tone: 3, form: 4.
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Gwah! That's another book on the long list of novels I need to read. =[ I hope your happy. Just playing =]. I think for the title, "The Forshadowing" would be fine. =]
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