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Drunk Rant

I don't drink...

I saw that people drink in the movies when they are pissed.

I am pissed...

So I popped open a bottle of rum and started slamming.

I am angry...

No bonus of any kind this year because there are cut backs and my demographic doesn't seem to be adjusting well.

I am lonely...

I haven't seen my family in so long I have to look at pictures to see what they look like.

I hate my boss...

What a chopped up money grubbing mother fucker to spend all day telling me what I did wrong after 61 hours of work in a week to make everything right.

I hate Christmas...

what once was a magical time of year that came paramount without change is now a necrotic appendage rotting as if it had no purpose to begin with!

Rum is swiilly.........

Fuck it I will be clocking in 6 days a week for the rest of my life so what the fuck to I care.

Author notes

wow... you read this...

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  • LifeIsIronic
    November 23, 2008
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    Wow

    Damn, Enoq not usual you, i agree,.. I love it.. It's Raw Emotion pretty much


  • Dr. POGO
    November 23, 2008

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    Surely not they type you usually write..
    But still great, like your past work
    Great work, Mr. Durnk and Pissed.


  • CarlySeye
    November 16, 2008
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    huh

    yep, piss drunk. looks familiar to me.


  • rhetorica gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    All that non drinking has finally rattled your bells!! guess what?..i can relate to nearly all of this(are you shocked)apart from the drinking bit,i`ve no liver left to drink with...
    This sounds like the truth so if it is then i hope things get easier for you,if it isn`t then i will point out what i see wrong in this work..you didn`t use enough fucks.

    bye.

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