To a very special person
this poem is made for you
Notice the one simple fact
that I love you too
I'm telling you you're giving
for being such a friend
And I hope you acknowledge
that I'll be there till the end
I'll never let you go
and if you're feeling down
I'll be there to cheer you up
Until you lift your frown
When you're feeling empty
or your heart starts to tear
I'll give you a band-aid
to let you know I care
I'll try to detect anything
even if you say
today I'm doing fine
I'll see if you're okay
I'll make you laugh
even if you're sad
I'll do my best
to get you back to glad
I want you to notice...
I really want you to know...
I'll get you happy
even through the cold
I hope this poem
lifts your mood
and tells you that
I love you too
Author notes
To a very special person. Even if the poem's a bit off, I hope you like it, since it's made just for you. ^-^ I also hope that you know who you are. You're one of the few lights in my dark, gray life, and I love you to pieces, even if I don't say it too often.
Comments
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Wow, this is amazing!! I love the rhythm in the peice. It's great!!
I have no idea what to say so, just some useless comment for you... haha
Hope
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Yaaaay. Useless comments are awesome.
Brian seemed to like it. *looks down at his loooong comment* 
Oh, yeah. ^-^ Thanks for the comment. 
~HAPPY THANKSGIVING~ Tofurkey, FTW
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How do I describe this?
Astonishing, Astounding, Amazing, Devine, Extaordinary, Fantasic, Glorious, Incredible, Impressive, Marvelous, Sensational, Spectacular, Splendid, Stupendous, Terrific, Tremendous, Wonderful, Wondrous...Of course I'm prejudice. I found this very touching and heartwarming. If I tried to tell you just how much it had touched me I would make another list. The sentiment you show is very heartfelt. I believe you mean every word. Truthfully it made me cry. However they were tears of joy. This eased my heartache and lifted my spirits. I know there will times in my life when I will be hurting and I will struggle, although as long as I have one true friend like you I will be Ok. I find it an honor and a privilege to be a light in your life. You in turn bring light into my life. I cannot put into words what a wonderful friend you are. I wish only wonderful things for you in life. I don't think I've ever used emoticons in a comment. These are for you Inky.
Brian
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Yaaay. Burger King liked it. And, yes. All of this is true. I'd do it all since you're such a great friend.
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