Marcsus Moore, my friend, can be quite technical of my work
And usually tells me exactly how he feels even if he has to
Rake me over the coals to make his point, which I don't begrudge
Cause I know he has the best of intentions and I
Understand that he just wants to see me create poetry
Suitable to his high standards which is to be as
Meaningful as possible and executed in a manner he finds
Outstanding and as flawless as possible in order to
Overwhelm the reader with strong emotions or a sudden
Realization that there is such meaning in the world
Everyone should strive to do their best in what they do
Author notes
This acrostic poem was written for my friend marcusmoore. Visit his page and give him a read. It's simple. Just click this link:
http://sharepoetry.com/marcusmoore
Acrostic: composition in verse with certain letters lined up.
How can I improve this?
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ya didn't have to go and do all that LoL, now I feel like an asshole. I really wasn't being serious when I had said the "WTF! where's my shout out!! LoL JK" It was honestly meant as a joke, But I appreciate this very much, though I'm not really a big fan of acrostic poems, there are some that I really enjoy, and of course being biased on this one I'd have to easily say that I personally enjoyed and appreciated this devotion of words. It means alot to me when people and friends that I've known personally and been through some trialing times with them, and yet those people haven't made or done anything to show their emotions in such a way that you have right here. Thank you again Brian. You are a true blue(water element) soul that's always out there giving it his best even if it's just to make one person smile. Which makes you a changer of the world. One little smile and laugh at a time
Thank you Brian! I hope to hear from you soon
TTYSoon
Your Friend
MM
P.S. Oh yea and about the Applause thing also, I didn't give you one on that poem b/c I've realized that I've been over using them, and if three's the best that it can be then to get three from me the poem's gonna have to really catch me by surprise/knock me off my feet or something to that extent LoL, I think ya get my idea. So it wasn't anything personal against you. But when I see a poem that's deserving I'll still be more than willing to give out the PERFECT THREE!
language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.
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