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"The Night For Little Children."

The sun is setting,
and the dark is rising

The people crawl in,
but monsters comes out

You never know
what's under your bed

until,
finally,

you crawl down
yourself

Oh, please, be careful
be with me           

             

For the night is
coming

And the moon is              
calling
out
...
..
.

 

by * The Screams *

 

Are you scared at the dark (be honest)?

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Comments

  • Livin.4.God
    November 28, 2008

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    No, not dark.

    I thought it was good. Just not your best. Filled with supence though xD. I like it though.

    Hope.