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I'm Done

I looked
I waited
I hoped
I'm done

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  • Lake Absence
    November 23, 2008
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    This is very good. As cee said, it's quite short but it's good that way. Great job.

  • cee
    November 21, 2008

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    This poem is very short and simple but it says a lot, I really like poems like this that are short and to the point.