Poetry       Forums       Freewrite       Store      

Subject: Comment:

(Check spelling) (Upgrade to gold for rich text editing)

Since your text contains rich formatting, add <br> where you want a newline (or use the rich editor).

Please login or register to comment.

Registration is required because of issues with spam. It is fast and free! This author would LOVE to get a comment from you, please join!

right now

Adding your reply:

Your Reply:

by Saturday Mar

On November 21, 2008

© All rights reserved

• This poem is in the archive, and is not being actively worked on. Please focus your reviews on newer poems.

Sign up for FREE

A free account is required to comment and participate. It's fast and free!

Already a member?

Name
Password

Publish, Critique, Revise

Get critical critiques and improve your poetry at Sharepoetry. → Learn more

Categories

Adult,  Angst,  Contemporary,  Dark,  Free verse,  Hope,  Life,  Love,  Nature,  Pain,  Personal,  Sad,  Society,  Spiritual,  Thoughts,  Weird

Please Support Sharepoetry

Right now on sharepoetry

• CarlySeye is viewing The Fertility Goddess
• David Saltaire is viewing The Road That Never Ends
• CarlySeye is viewing The Glass Eater
• David Saltaire just edited It's War

Sharepoetry focuses on poetry being revised, by active members only. We're allpoetry's little sister.