Such a wonderful friend
You have come to be
Helping me up
when I was down
Offering to wrap
your jacket around me
so that it's warmth
could soothe me
as the warm rain
washes over my face
I'd not turn away from you
in your time of need
Waves of happiness flood me
as I drink them in
Thankful
for you Deer
Author notes
Author notes:
Deer, I know that you will understand the heartfelt sentiment which comes from within me.
Thank you for being there when I needed you and for offering me so much kindness.
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Loverly
It speaks right out to you,
Makes a warm feeling inside of yourself.
I love how you also used deer instead of dear.
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I like lip gloss.
language: 5, rhythm: 1, subject: 5, tone: 4, form: 5.
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Thank you.
Though I'm not sure how your comment relates to the poem, I appreciate it none the less. I'm always telling poeple that even simple comments are appreciated. With this simple line you have told me you read my poem and that it was worth at least saying you read it. Personally, I love lip gloss. Although I only wear it when it is properly applied to my lips by someone elses lips. I think that is a very shade of lip gloss that you have is very pretty.
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It's always nice to have friends to trust xD. I really like it, it says so much in one poem. You did a wonderful job writing.
Hope.
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Thank you.
Having close friends is very important. This poem does have a lot of meaning. She helps to lift my spirit when I'm down. Remember that you too have a friend you can trust in me.
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Awee
That's so sweet...
I still got more
to give though...
So don't be afraid to ask.
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Thank you.
You are too kind. I won't hesitate if I'm ever down. I know I can count on you. For some reason I can't reply to the message you've sent me. It must be a glitch in the system. I hope this thank you reaches you. Thank you once again for every last word of kindness.
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