You go girl
CRUSH that little sucker into that tree
No don't worry how much it costs
Oh it doesn't matter,
Let it all out, sweetheart
It's just a lump of metal
Daddy can get you a new one
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What, darling?
You wanted to die? Whatever for?
Ohh, because it's your birthday
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Ohh, because he was
kissing that girl
in the garden
on your bithday?
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NO WAY HOW DARE HE
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I'm sorry baby
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It`s not unclear at all,I would consider ditching the author notes,let the reader think a little,
I kind of feel sorry for these type of spoiled kids who get everything they ask for except the stuff they really need,its the parents fault for sure
anyway,its certainly not your normal type of writing but its precise and to the point so i think its good,well done
bye
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Okay, thanks I agree
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