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ch4tsp34k ish3wz

s0 lyk eye hav 4 s3rius pr0b w/
th3 wurd "lol"
I m34n, lyk h0w d0 u typ 4 wurd lyk th4t
is it LOL 0r LoL 0r lol
I m34n g4wd
LOL s0undz lyk ur scr34ming n0 0ff3ns
it sc4r3s ppl
d0nt lyk 3vr d3w th4t srsly
n LoL s0undz lyk
u just hav rlly b4d gr4mm4r
lyk g3t 4 lyf will u
n lol just s0undz lyk u d0nt 3v3n c4r3
ugh lyf is s0000 h4rd!!!!!
g4wd

w3ll u kno im n0t r34lly s3rius ab0ut this p03m so wut3vs lyk d0nt t4k3 this srsly

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  • Verix
    November 25, 2008

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    Errr, yes, more of a puzzle than a poem really! I felt like i was trying to translate something. That said i agreeed with what (i think) you were trying to say, so it wasn't all bad!

    language: 3, rhythm: 1, subject: 4, tone: 3, form: 2.


  • Windhover gold member
    November 24, 2008
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    Easy Peasy Pleasy

    This doesn't exactly flow - but I like puzzles (particularly easy ones) so I enjoyed it. >W<

    • cee
      November 24, 2008
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      Well I know it's not very good, but I had a blast writing it, I crack myself up lolol


  • rhetorica gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    what makes this so good is the fact that i can understand all of it and i dont use this type of jargon,
    this is really original,its so poetext,although i cant fully understand the title,which i`m quite pleased about...it is chatspeak is so...i cant work it out,you`ll have to tell me....ahhh i just got it,"chatspeak issues" ha! ha! ha! lol or LOL or LoL or should it not be "Xd",thats even better than lol apparently

    great fun
    bye

    • cee
      November 24, 2008
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      LOL u r n0t s3rius r u, u think this izz "g00d"???

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