This girl is fourteen
and already hanging out
where the cool kids do
drinking with the boys who
put up with her only 'cause
they know that good things
come in small packages.
Even the long-legged
cheerleader is jealous of
her punk-rock boyfriend
who plays in garage bands
who's just a nice body
with a cute face.
She knows it, and acts
like she doesn't, like
it's just an accident,
attracting the guys
like honey does bees.
Well, honeybee,
enjoy it
while it lasts.
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Enlightened.
I like the methaphor you decided to use. This is a very accurate description of bees. They're only attracted when the honey is flowing and still tastes sweet. Eventually the honey will run out. I found this a very interesting way to descride this situation. Very insightful. Well done.
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Thank you!!
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Good work,flows nicely with a perfect conclusion,
again you display great insight of this subject(teenage vanity)
well beyond your age
super poem
bye
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Thank you!
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