With your looks
and smooches
My heart thud
like a ferociuos drum
With your hugs
and kisses
I mealt away easily
and creepingly
With your ckeeks
touching against
mine,
With your gentle words
I heard inside
My body froze
and never - ever
again
see you
"Love" can
be
so
"Blind"
by * L. B. *
Author notes
I just made this poem in my imagination.
Isn't it just harsh if your boyfriend or girlfriend just suddenly said "Let's break-up" while your having an awesome time with him/her?
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I tried to comment on this one...
But I can't see the words. Try to change them to something that will show up and then let me know and I'll try again. -
Yes it's harsh, though never happened to me.. bc never had a boyfriend.
anyways, great poem, beautiful. one thing, I would change the font color because I had to highlight each stanza and everything thing else to read it.
Hope. -
Yes it is really harsh .I liked your poem.It's simple and beautiful.There's so much feeling in it.I can relate with what you say .Keep up the good work!
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