I'm
Sorry
For
Everything
That
I
Have
Done
I
Am
Sorry
For
All
Our
Issues;
Problems
I
Am
Sorry
I
Haven't
Been
Better
Mom,
I'm
Sorry
But
Please
Forgive
Me...
Author notes
I wrote this poem after a big fight I had with my mom. Luckily, we haven't had one for about a little less than a week.. about 5, 6 days..
But apperantly, she forgave me. xD
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So Sad Hope
I loved your format it gave the poem a sense of innocense, the relationship with our parrents can be so difficult sometimes esppecially between mothers and daugthers.
Keep posting these wonderful writes I look forward to your next one.
Your Friend
Distant Unknown
language: 4, rhythm: 5, subject: 3, tone: 4, form: 4.
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The Distant Unknown,
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, as always!
Hope
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This is like me and my mom....
OMG!
I'm glad you wrote this. This is exactly what happens between me and my mom. I love it. Really emotional.language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.
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Thanks... ummm.. I'm not sure if you want me to call you your real name or not... So I'll say Smilie for right now.. So thanks Smilie for the wonderful comment, and I'm sorry to hear about you and your mom!!
Ooh, can't wait til the party!
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Your poem is short but very emotional .That's the way life is we can always say I'm sorry . I'm glad that you wrote about the fighting you had with your mother ,cause writing always helps and makes you feel better. Keep up the good work !
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I'm sure she did.
You see it is very difficult for most parents to stay mad at their children for too long. No matter what you do we still love you deeply. All you can do is try your best to make things work. Try to imagine how your mother is feeling when you fight. That will help you to gain a better perspective.
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