Well, what you're SUPPOSED to say
when I ask you how this looks is
"It looks very pretty on you"
and when I tell you to LISTEN is
"You're absolutely right"
and when I complain about THIS,
you are SUPPOSED to say
"I totally agree"
when I ask you should I try this?
you say "DEFINITELY"
and when I tell you I LOVE you,
it's your cue to tell me
"I love you TOO"
and don't try LYING to me either,
I'm warning you
we are ridiculous sometimes, we know it =)
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It's funny and well written .Always nice to read your work Cee .Something very original that I'd never thought about.
Keep up the good work !
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Thank you!
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Nice
I loved this write its so true and happens all the time.
I like its playful element.
Keep the good work up
Distant Unknown
language: 3, rhythm: 4, subject: 4, tone: 3, form: 3.
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Thank you!
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hey cee
i knew i was doing something wrong! thanks for setting the record straight. i think there should be more battle of the sexes poems especially from women.
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Thanks, I think so too
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Too funny! Yes, but at least SOME of us can admit it! Anyways, great job with the poem! Keep writing. Or else. Bad things. =].
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That's right, be proud of it sweetheart, we have the boys knocking themselves out trying to figure us out.... what can they do about it, absolutely nothing
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Hey, this is funny.
Women are strange creatures, but my wife has broken the code and divulged the secrets of you all, so now I'm savvy to you all's wonky ways.
The number one thing I've learned after twelve years of marriage is: *trumpet fanfare* Don't try to fix her, just shut up and listen, letting her know from time to time that you are still listening by occasionally restating what it is you've just heard. Yep..women really are that easy to please. I think it's funny how we men primp and pose and do all sorts of antics when really all we needed was a set of ears.
This was humorous with a snappy bit o fun stapled to it.
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Oh darn it, she's betrayed us all, but then I guess it's what we tend to do when we join enemy forces
thank you
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very original poem except in real this is not funny,sometimes it doesn`t matter what a man says or does,if the woman in his life wants an argument then he`s getting one
but this isn`t real life,its a poem and an extremely humorous one
well done
it made me laugh/cry
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Thanks, it's supposed to be funny
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