Uniform in artificial figure,
Antiquating all undesirable trend,
Pliable, emulative, as well as lacking;
Confirm all desire,
Producing every possible mien,
Beautiful? Attractive? Or in hiding?
Eyebrows, disproportionate;
Her arches in perfection;
Eye color, unfit;
Her vision vivid for deception;
Nose, unacceptable;
Her olfaction altered;
Lips, undesirable;
Her kisses' sweeter, further yearned;
Bosom, defective;
Her presence innumerably known;
Excess fat, repulsive;
Her body emits sexuality, dressing like a queen;
She was stripped of all,
She is anew design model,
She will be her barbie doll.
Author notes
Hopefully it made sense. -_-
Who is "Her" and who is "Barbie Doll"?
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Excellent. I liked the way you described the separate parts of the Doll as being deceptive and your word choices are precise
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Thank you!
Your comment is very much appreciated! Many women in today's society are almost like dolls..."deceptive." It's sad that some no longer want their natural self and create something new from technology to form a more attractive and beautiful image of societies' doll.
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