I can't stand that girl Brenda.
She's so weird
She and her stupid Cabbage Patch doll.
She never talks.
Look at her, her face is filthy.
I don't want to touch her
she probably has all kinds of germs.
Let's throw her Cabbage Patch doll in the dirt.
Let's stomp on it.
Let's put it in the oven.
Let's pinch her.
Let's slap her.
Look, her skin is turning purple.
Isn't that funny?
Let's laugh at her.
Ha ha ha ha ha!
Is she going to cry now?
I think she's starting to.
look at her face.....
Why isn't Brenda crying?
Ewwww, why is she still holding that stupid Cabbage Patch doll?
Look how ugly it is.
Look how filthy it is.
Why is Brenda still smiling?
What does she have to smile about?
Cry, Brenda!
We'll make you cry.
We'll hurt you if we have to.
Oh, wait..... the teacher's coming.
Let's make her cry later.
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Very powerful poem about school bullying,it makes me feel sorry for Brenda first then anger towards the bullies later
Its a problem within schools that will exist for a long time to come,you have tackled this problem head on in a very realistic manner
a couple of things for you to consider,i dont think you need to use so many full stops and the third line doesn`t seem right to me,perhaps you could consider saying "her and that stupid..."instead of "she and her stupid...". Maybe i`m wrong but its something to think about
Bye
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Thank you very much,
Brenda is very pitiful but she's a very brave soul, she never cried
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