In the bagpack of a runaway child
you would find things that keeps
the child alive: photo of the child's family, snickers, m & m's, one water bottle, $20 and 10 dimes, a short, a shirt, underwears, a cap, two socks, and a stone.
You would find things that keeps this child
alive.
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I wanna run-away from my home for no reason, i think. LOL!!!! XD
Do you ever tried to run-away from your home for some reason(s)?
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I never did
When I Was a teenager I lived with a few of my friends for a couple weeks because my mama and I were fighting too much, but I knew enough about life to understand that running away would cause me much more difficulties than staying
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No, not really...
Good poem. I have some suggestions though. I paste and add the suggestions in there.
In the backpack of a runaway child
you would find things that keeps
him alive: a photo of his family,
snickers, m & m's,
a water bottle,
Twenty dollars; a few dimes,
Some clothing garments,
a cap,
two socks,
and a stone.
The things that keeps this
Child Alive..
The reason why put "him" is because, it could stand as both genders. AKA, "Every man is created equal" if you know what I mean.
That's up to you.
This is a good start though!
Hope.
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