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Be in love with me (lyrics- rough version)

Open up your eyes and come with me
maybe baby then you will see
how much you really mean to me
and how your love can set you free.

Speak to me with every single word
that graces your lips, they shall be heard.
I never want you to be alone
or feel depressed, just call my phone
cause I will always be here for you
and do anything that I must do
to make sure that you are you, yes it's true. [chorus}

Open up your heart to my light
and let it kill this darkness that you fight.
Let your spirit's light shine on through
this mask your face is holding to.

Feel my lips pressed against your cheek,
feeling the sparks flow from you to me.
I don't want to leave this place again,
my love for you will last until my end.

[chorus]

I swear I won't be another guy
to steal you heart then make you cry.
I simply want to be here with you
and forever I'll stay if you want me to.

Your baby blue eyes, they could be the sky
and I'm a bird flying so high
among the trees with great big blooms,
we're sitting there kissing to the moon.

[chorus]

Sing to me a sweet lullaby
to let me know that everything's alright
and promise me that you will come through
with this love I see in you.

I want to make you mine forever, be in love with me.

Author notes

A friend of mine asked me to write some lyrics for him to make into a song, hence why it's from the guys point of view. This is just a rough, so any suggestions would be nice.

Thanks a bunch,
Ash

It's a rough, so any suggestions?

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