A child exists
She doesn't know if she is
or not
She doesn't know if
she has a mother
of her own
She's numb, hopeless,
wonderring in the earth
But doesn't
find any answer
Her mother isn't like
yours
Her mother hates
'her'
'her' : apperance
voice
hobby
skills
actions
happiness
ALL
Her mother always says : 'you need to smile'
but how, if you're hurting me?
'u need to greet people nice'
but how, if my practices
are all wrong to you
'even if you're smart, you're still
ugly'
but how, if you're the one
who's making me ugly?
' u need to stop staring at
people with you're devil-looking- eyes'
but how, if that's what i look?
She screams everytime, trying to find
the answer she's looking for.
But for now her answer is ;
"I don't have a mother"
by "mE"
Author notes
I put my feelings into this poem. I know it's not good, but at least i wrote a poem. lol... And i'm the child who's screaming and trying to find the answer. And today, i don't have a mother that cares for 'me'.^.^
Do u love ur mother?
Comments
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Sorry about the first view had to go to school sadly.
Anyways you made me hurt. This is such a deep, personal, thoughtful poem.
Some things:
-I think you should use real spelling instead of "u" and "ur" to make the poem more poetic.
-"A child exist" should be:
"A child exists"
But good poem!!
Hope.
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Oh my
Your emotions made my heart hurt, as a mother myself... this made me want to look at you and remind you that you are a beautiful, whole, perfect person who is destined to be greater than your mother. There are no boundaries for you, my child, and anyone who tells you otherwise is a lair.
When she tells you that you are not good enough, don't believe her.
LOVE TO YOU
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