Searching the seemingly perpetual fields of filth
Yearning for a taste of your ecstasy
Wandering blindly through thorn bushes, glistening with your malignity.
Devouring your adorable, little, ignorant thoughts of amorousness,
while gauging on your mendacity.
As vivacious as the sea is ruthless
Daredevil mentality as blatant as your imprudence.
I find my self completely repulsed but utterly infatuated.
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hi sky,i needed the dictionary for a few words but after that i came to the conclusion that this poem is about drug addiction or more specifically someone has the delerium tremens and feels repulsed but in need of a fix
of course it could also be about a sexual fantasy
but i`m sticking with the former and i`ll look forward to you telling me that i`m completely wrong
well done
p.s is that a big spider on that persons face?
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In a way, you are quite accurate. The poem is about a personal fault of mine. Craving stability, yet hating the commitment, In regards to relationships. That person is actually me, and that big spider, is my baby "Fluffy". He's a Chilean Rose Hair. Thank you so much for all your comments! I can't thank you enough for taking the time to read and comment!
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Nice Language
Very vivid language that sparks imagination well written keep up the good work.
Distant Unknown
language: 4, rhythm: 4, subject: 4, tone: 5, form: 4.
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