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Worst Nightmare

the darkness around me
is thick and heavy
it is hard for me to breath
but I somehow manage to scream

the tears roll down my face
as I feel your pain
and I scream ance again
I scream out your name

I look around
trying to find you
but this darkness is too thick
that I can't see at all

I want this to be a dream
but it is so real
that I can't tell
if it is real or fake

the adrkness around me
is so thick and heavy
it is so hard for me to breath
somehow I manage to scream out your name

it this a dream
am I awake or asleep
I can't tell anymore
because of the pain

tears fall down my face
as I fall to my knees
screaming out your name
into this darkness

it this
just a dream?

the darkness that surrounds me
that is thicker than anything
that I stop breathing completly
and I silp to my death

i open my eyes
sweat rolling down my face
as my breathing goes down
i guess it was just a dream

Just a dream
but my
Worst Nightmare

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  • michael13
    December 17, 2008

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    beautiful poem. it made stop and think and that is a good thing not many things make me stop to think about my dreams and such. and then it also gives a whole new perspective on life. like what do we value most...is it greed, love, or personal?
    there is so much to think on. but again lovely poem.

    Blessed Be
    ~Starla~

    language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.