the world around me
is nothing
yet it is something
but what can it be?
the sky so blue
the grass so green
taking in this strange seen
everything so new
the world around me
is nothing
yet it is something
what can this world be?
just my imagination
going horribly wrong
all winter long
throughout the nation
the world around me
is nothing
yet it is something
what can this strange world be?
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wowz hun. I really love it its so emotional. ^w^ great job..keep up the great work, Bella
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thank you
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"the world around me
is nothing
yet it is something
but what can it be?"
i think that at one point and time we all stop and think the same thing. you are young and it is a good thing that you stop and think now. you have a very opened mind and as you think that that is a dangerous thing it can also be a very good thing. i have been in your situation many times before. continue to wonder and explore the different stages of the world. keep your mind open and be observant.
"the sky so blue
the grass so green
taking in this strange seen
everything so new"
language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.
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Very interesting. It makes you think like a good poem should.
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Sis this is amazing, keep up the good work
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