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Can't Hide The Pain

Everyday when I wake up
I see that nothing's changed
Always the same
Always deranged

I can't hide the pain
It's pulling me
To the ground
I can't hide the pain
It's casuing me
To lose my sanity
I can't hide the pain

Everyday it's the same routine
I go to school
People stare at me
I feel so small
I feel 2 inches tall

I can't hide the pain
It's pulling me
To the ground
I can't hide the pain
It's casuing me
To lose my sanity
I can't hide the pain

I try to tell my self
To ignore the pain
But it never goes away
You'd think after 17 years
I'd learn to make it fade

I can't hide the pain
It's pulling me
To the ground
I can't hide the pain
It's casuing me
To lose my sanity
I can't hide the pain

I have my friends
I have my family
But it doesn't stop the pain
that comes when people judge me
It doesn't stop the pain
When people want to drive me insane

I can't hide the pain
It's pulling me
To the ground
I can't hide the pain
It's casuing me
To lose my sanity
I can't hide the pain

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  • The Distant Unknown
    December 16, 2008

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    Sad

    Its a wonderful poem but such sadness lays beneath these words. There seems to be a pain that has been for seven teen years I'm sorry that you have to go through that. Being 17 isn't easy sometimes I know because I'm the same age as you. My favorite stanza was:
    "I can't hide the pain
    It's pulling me
    To the ground
    I can't hide the pain
    It's casuing me
    To lose my sanity
    I can't hide the pain"
    Anyway keep up the good writes.

    Distant Unknown

    language: 4, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 4, form: 4.