Everyday when I wake up
I see that nothing's changed
Always the same
Always deranged
I can't hide the pain
It's pulling me
To the ground
I can't hide the pain
It's casuing me
To lose my sanity
I can't hide the pain
Everyday it's the same routine
I go to school
People stare at me
I feel so small
I feel 2 inches tall
I can't hide the pain
It's pulling me
To the ground
I can't hide the pain
It's casuing me
To lose my sanity
I can't hide the pain
I try to tell my self
To ignore the pain
But it never goes away
You'd think after 17 years
I'd learn to make it fade
I can't hide the pain
It's pulling me
To the ground
I can't hide the pain
It's casuing me
To lose my sanity
I can't hide the pain
I have my friends
I have my family
But it doesn't stop the pain
that comes when people judge me
It doesn't stop the pain
When people want to drive me insane
I can't hide the pain
It's pulling me
To the ground
I can't hide the pain
It's casuing me
To lose my sanity
I can't hide the pain
Comments
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Sad
Its a wonderful poem but such sadness lays beneath these words. There seems to be a pain that has been for seven teen years I'm sorry that you have to go through that. Being 17 isn't easy sometimes I know because I'm the same age as you.
My favorite stanza was:
"I can't hide the pain
It's pulling me
To the ground
I can't hide the pain
It's casuing me
To lose my sanity
I can't hide the pain"
Anyway keep up the good writes.
Distant Unknown
language: 4, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 4, form: 4.

