I can't seen anything
The panic is building
I'm about to lose control
My mind is screaming
The pain is too intense
Through the Darkness
I can hear your voice
Through the Darkness
I can feel your arms
Through the Darkness
I know I've got a choice
Through the Darkness
I've got to raise an alarm
My vision is all blurry
All I can see is red
I can feel the terror
Building when they bled
I don't know who I am
Through the Darkness
I can hear your voice
Through the Darkness
I can feel your arms
Through the Darkness
I know I've got a choice
Through the Darkness
I've got to raise an alarm
My senses have changed
I don't feel the same
I know it's the beginning
Of a different game
I can't fight it
The desire is to strong
I know i'm about
To do something wrong
Through the Darkness
I can hear your voice
Through the Darkness
I can feel your arms
Through the Darkness
I know I've got a choice
Through the Darkness
I've got to raise an alarm
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Dark
I really enjoyed this dark poem although I'm really sorry in such deep pain.
As usually you poem shows a nice flow of consistency. The theme is one I can relate to this so well. My favorite stanza was:
"Through the Darkness
I can hear your voice
Through the Darkness
I can feel your arms
Through the Darkness
I know I've got a choice
Through the Darkness
I've got to raise an alarm"
Thank you for sharing your work I'm really enjoying reading
Distant Unknown
language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 4, form: 4.
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