I don't know what's happening
Everything is becoming brighter
The sounds are coming clearer
My world is changing
What if I lose control
Will you stop me
What if I lose control
Can you keep me from hurting someone
What if I lose control
I hear your voice
It sounds so angelic
I feel your touch
It feels so warm and soft
What if I lose control
Will you stop me
What if I lose control
Can you keep me from hurting someone
What if I lose control
Something's different
I'm not supposed
To feel these emotions
They were supposed to disappear
What if I lose control
Will you stop me
What if I lose control
Can you keep me from hurting someone
What if I lose control
I love you, I need you
Please help me keep control
I love you, I need you
Don't let me do something wrong
What if I lose control
Will you stop me
What if I lose control
Can you keep me from hurting someone
What if I lose control
Comments
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Wonderful
Nice write a lovely flow of constantly and a clearly defined subject. We all fear of loosing control of ourselves at times and me need someone there when those times are upon us. Nice Job keep up the good poems
Distant Unknown
language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 4, tone: 4, form: 4.
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