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I will win

I know one thing
I know for sure
One day I will
One day I'll win

Life can only
Keep its grip
For so long
On me

I will beat
I will come out
I will stand up
I will win

I will win

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  • Done
    January 4, 2009

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    No you won't...

    Success is simply failure deferred. One day you'll lose. The fact that you're in a free country with time to burn on this site means you've won already. We're all winners who simply must learn how to deal with failure. But I liked the sentiment and sense of determination that exudes from this write. We get what we believe and aim for; so good for you for believing in something better for your life. Faith is half the battle. Yeah...on second thought, I think you will win.

    al