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Night

He gives me courage
The kind that can't be destroyed
He gives me love
The kind that can't be deployed

Night
It's the perfect time to meet
Night
Makes me happy with just one seed
Night
It give me pleasure I can't control
Night
Fills the emptyness and makes me whole


I can feel his body against mine
The fire spreading through his skin
I'm so distracted I forgot the time
Like I always do when I'm with him

Night
It's the perfect time to meet
Night
Makes me happy with just one seed
Night
It give me pleasure I can't control
Night
Fills the emptyness and makes me whole


Now he holds me in his arms
And captures my eyes with his charms
His lips press against mine
My body once again becomes his shrine

Night
It's the perfect time to meet
Night
Makes me happy with just one seed
Night
It give me pleasure I can't control
Night
Fills the emptyness and makes me whole


I know I love him
This I can't deny
I know he'll never leave me
Because of the child I conceived

Night
It's the perfect time to meet
Night
Makes me happy with just one seed
Night
It give me pleasure I can't control
Night
Fills the emptyness and makes me whole

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  • Bella Cullen
    December 18, 2008
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    "Night
    It's the perfect time to meet
    Night
    Makes me happy with just one seed
    Night
    It give me pleasure I can't control
    Night
    Fills the emptyness and makes me whole"

    reminds me of twilight...lol..alot of things remind me of twilight but i know who you are truely talking about. you and your boyfriends love for eachother. may your lives together be full of "fun" and happiness

    language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.