12/25/08
Mommy...
it's cold....
so...
cold...
Mommy...
i wanna...
go home....
With grandma...
and...
grand-...
pa...
Mommy...
Why did daddy shout at us?
Why did he...
pushed us out...
Mommy...
why???
Mommy....
why aren't you
answer me....???
Mommy...
what's wrong???
Mommy...
why are you crying....???
Mommy,
is Christmas
is when you're crying?
When you're here in the dark?
Where you're sad?
When You're hungry?
Is that Christmas Mommy?
by * M,y Ch-il+d= *
Author notes
I just have this "picture" in my mind that made me write this poem. LOL
What's Christmas?
Comments
-
Wow. Great job, this is very touching.
-S -
So sad! Yet so beautiful.
I quite don't understand the title:
" A c-hil+d's Wint=er"
I might reword this:
is Christmas
is when you're crying
And some other things.
Like ??? to only one ?.
Anyways great job!!
Hope.
Adding your comment:
