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Yuki and Zero

Destiny and fate tied together
Forever looking for love and hope
Two different beings, two different hearts
Walking the earth searching, waiting
Trying to find someone to listen
Someone would know's their pain and anguish

Some see one of the two different beings as a beast
He thinks the very same thing
But really the other being thinks different about him
She thinks he's worth something
And that he can do anything he set's his mind to

He thinks the same about her
He thinks she is something special
But her blood draws him to her as well
It's like his own brand of drug that was made just for him

Something so addictive and exaggerating to him

 

Two different being, two different hearts

But when you really look at it

Their really just the same

Both wanting, both waiting

Two creatures of a kind

Searching for that one strand of happiness...

Author notes

This a poem for Yuki and Zero ^^ enjoy please

^^ Tell me what you think..I would love to hear you comment about this.

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  • Lake Absence
    December 19, 2008

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    Yay!!!!

    This was awesome! Then again, I'm a total VK fangirl, so I might be slightly biased. Whatever, I liked it. Go Zero!


  • Yuki Kiryu
    December 19, 2008

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    ooo! I LOVE THIS POEM! IT IS SOOOO TRUE!

    "Destiny and fate tied together
    Forever looking for love and hope
    Two different beings, two different hearts
    Walking the earth searching, waiting
    Trying to find someone to listen
    Someone would know's their pain and anguish

    Some see one of the two different beings as a beast
    He thinks the very same thing
    But really the other being thinks different about him
    She thinks he's worth something
    And that he can do anything he set's his mind to

    He thinks the same about her
    He thinks she is something special
    But her blood draws him to her as well
    It's like his own brand of drug that was made just for him

    Something so addictive and exaggerating to him



    Two different being, two different hearts

    But when you really look at it

    Their really just the same

    Both wanting, both waiting

    Two creatures of a kind

    Searching for that one strand of happiness..."

    language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.


  • Bella Cullen
    December 19, 2008

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    "Some see one of the two different beings as a beast
    He thinks the very same thing
    But really the other being thinks different about him
    She thinks he's worth something
    And that he can do anything he set's his mind to

    He thinks the same about her
    He thinks she is something special
    But her blood draws him to her as well
    It's like his own brand of drug that was made just for him

    Something so addictive and exaggerating to him"


    so true...it also reminds me of Edward and Bella. how Edward is drawn to Bella by her blood as well. lol. i love this poem.


    "Two different being, two different hearts

    But when you really look at it

    Their really just the same

    Both wanting, both waiting

    Two creatures of a kind

    Searching for that one strand of happiness..."

    language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.

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