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"My Father"

I deeply apologize




For I have been
a very terrible daughter
to you, not being the
daugether you ever wanted from me




I misfortune daughter:
always laughing, having
a great time, and
smiling




It's also very unfair of you
to be like that to me: it's very
painful, very harsh, and
very sinister of you










by " +Daug=h/Terx "






Author notes

"Dad I'm truly sorry, please forgive me."

Isn't it scary of the voices of adult men?

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Comments


  • Lake Absence
    December 22, 2008

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    It depends on the guy.

    To be honest, I didn't quite get it, whether it is about your father's contempt for you, or your contempt for your father, I don't know. Can you explain?

  • Livin.4.God
    December 21, 2008

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    Sometimes if their cranky/angry

    anyways, very wonderful, sad, poem that is very beautiful in it's own poetic way.

    My favorite stanza is:
    "I deeply apologize




    For I have been
    a very terrible daughter
    to you, not being the
    daugether you ever wanted from me"

    Even if I deeply apologize isn't "part" of the stanza.

    Daughter is daughter when I saw "daugether" but that was just a typo right, because every where else it was daughter.

    Hope