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Two Strangers

Two Stangers


Two silhouettes converge on a wall
caught up in bright crystal balls
turn into two dancing shadows
Whirling the evening away
Like music box figurines
Two strangers meet on a dance floor

Two shooting stars converge in night skies
Tied together by mutual attraction
Shining more brilliant than the light of the moon
As gravity draws them together
Soon they circle each other in warmth
Two strangers converge as soul mates

Two trickling rivulets flow into one stream
eventually forming one beautiful sea
Of unfathomable loving depths
As the waters deepen
And thickens
Two soul-mates converge as sweethearts

As discordant bird songs meet in harmony
Haphazard sounds change to grand symphony
of beauteous music spread through the skies
And music in crescendo
Overcomes inhibitions
Two sweethearts converge as lovers

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