Some say I'm stubborn
which I have to say is true.
Stubbornly I refuse
what ever I think is cruel
You cannot make me do
Whatever I cannot stand
Stubbornness is my happiness
Of course it may be not to you
to let go of what I dream
Is impossible for me
The thing I most cling to
That I'm most stubborn about
Is happiness
I feed upon happiness
What I like is different
I am more different than you
I like humid
I like rain
I like the feeling
that drives most people insane
As the storm passes
I will stand
As fire burns my tender skin
I do not die of vain
I am stubborn anyways
but in a good way
I will stand upon a stormy cliff
just for the thrill
My friends will call me from afar
to tell me not to got so far
My friends would jump in after me
If I really do drown
But of course I wouldn't want them to
just in case they should fall in
I know I am stubborn
But in a good way
I will not give up
on anything
My dream is in my heart
My heart is in my soul
My soul is full of happiness
Happiness is where my stubbornness lay
I am stubborn
That cannot change
I am more stubborn than anyone
but a different stubborn
I am stubborn in a good way
I will not give up
I will keep on dreaming
I will not let go
I will make my dreams come true
I am going to make life go on
No matter what happens
I will make my life come true
Like a dream
but better
it is good to be stubborn
But in a certain good way
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"you can not make me do
whatever i can not stand."
I love this line
You are so fun.
And I like this poem.
Wish i had friends like that though.
Good poem
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Thanks :)
Heheh.. thanks So much! Your so kind!
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"My dream is in my heart, my heart is in my soul"
Beautiful discription and is very relatable. Bravo
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Me too.
I have a bit of a stubborn streak as well. I like the way you described how being stubborn can be a good thing. As a matter of fact there are things in life it is important to be stubborn about. I believe it can be a great quality. You have a great example of that. My favorite lines in fact, the third and fourth. There are a few things you might want to fix. First line - stay = say, line twenty four - I do not die of vain = I do not die in vain, line forty two - Happiness is where my stubbornness lay = Happiness is where my stubbornness lies.
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"My dream is my heart
My heart is my soul" are my favorite lines .You've got some good lines in here.I like the positive feeling that I got from this poem .Nicely done !
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Thanks :D
I was feeling very poetic when i wrote that. ( if you know when that mean ).
I like to express my feelings and thoughts into my poems ( if i don't I couldn't write them.. )
I am very stubborn... but sometimes it is good
Thanks!
Celtic
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nicely put
your poem sings of hope and love inspiration never give up. But sometimes we must give in.
Good job young lady. Keep writing.
language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.
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Um...
Woops.
I wrote that at two in the morning..
I better go fix all those spelling errors...
(sigh)
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