I Played coochie-coo
then peek-a-boo
with my new born baby boy
I tweaked his cheeks
he took a peek
as I rattled his new toy
His backside burped
when he would slurp
from his bottle much too quick
Upon his knee
he`d taken a wee
then he covered me with sick
His chestnut eyes
began to cry
as he heard me fix his bath
I wiped his tears
then tickled his ears
`til he began to laugh
I washed him clean
and so it seemed
he would sleep right through the night
I noticed his head
had turned bright red
then he covered me with shi............te!!!
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Ha love your style love the way you make me laugh why do i want to cry then fuck hahaha fuck
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Most of here need a good cryfuck lainy...
dont be sad
love
rhet
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yeah your right
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coochie-coo
'coochie-coo' T says while tweaking Rhet's cheeks....
Such a cutie pootie.....
T xxxx
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i`ll vomit on you if you`re not careful T,
will you wipe my arse?
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God you are Hilarious, I love how you can always make me smile!
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haha
Haha when I was baby
i bit my grnadmother on her toe then her chest
i dont think she ever forgave me that ..haha
she wont let me forget it haha
this poem just made me think twice about having kids
anyways this was cute
Maya
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hey maya baby boo boo big bad wolf bear
thanks
shame about your grannyknashing
rhet
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I can share but you have to take all 4... They are priceless I do love the feeling you showed in writting this I saw the love in you and thaat was cool you see a baby could make even the coldest heart smile I know mine warmed mine up a lil. hahaha
~ERIKA
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Hey ERIKA, thank you, i`m a big baby too
although im not priceless,
a cup of coffee and a slice of cake
and im all yours
i`ve recently just stopped needing diapers,
i can walk with freedom
for the first time in my life
but i still love sucking breasts
bye
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Your to much you big baby!!!!!! Thank god your out of diapers imagine the mess
i could realy say alot more to this but i choose to reserve it for now....
~ERIKA~
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awww babies.... so cute, so messy and then when they turn 3 they beat you with hockey sticks....or is that just my kid? hahaha
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babies are magical,the best part is giving them back to their mother
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haha ....i wish i knew the feeling...im a single mom
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Aweeee, that's cute. Finally a different side of you. Aweeee!
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HAHAHAHA!!! This was sooooo cute and funny!! I loved this one. It's reminds me of a nursery rhyme and it's too darn cute. I don't think I've read anything on Sharepoetry this darn adorable. :-)
language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.
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hey mallam23,thank you so much,i really thought this poem would be seen for what it is,adorable,cute and written in a childish way but then nobody commented and i felt sad
until now when i feel happy again
thanks again for making me happy
i hope you`re happy too
lol
rhet
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