I wish I could forget everything
That had happened in my past
To where I am today.
I wish I could speak
But I am too afraid to
Say a word
I wish I were myself
And know that everything
Will be ok
I wish I knew what was happening
To me
I wish I could erase all my horrible memories
And be free in this dark cage
I wish I were whole and loved
I just want to hide and cry
I just want to know
If I will survive
Author notes
Last line means that I will ever recover what I'm going through..
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This makes me sad.
I knew that you had been through something that was severe. I know that you are afraid to speak of it but that is the first step. I wish that you could find the courage to face this fear and these memories that haunt you. I can't tell you how to feel whole again. However finding someone to talk to about it is, as I said, the place to start. Just talking about it will help at least a little. I want you to know that you Are Loved. I don't really know you but I love you as a friend. I think you are a wonderful young lady. I wish you would talk to me so that I could try to help. I'm not sure if your Authors notes mean if you will ever recover From what you're going through or what you mean. I'm here Hope and I'm willing to listen.
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Thanks Brian, I know you mean well.
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So Sad
This is a really sad write hope you almost had me in tears I really hope you will get through this okay I'm so sorry that you feel this way. Your a really nice person you gave me allot of encouragement when I first joined here and I wish to repay your kindness. Your poetry is so heartfelt that the reader cannot help but be moved by your words. Although you seem to going through hell yo still keep writing and that is something to be proud of Hope.
So Please take care
Distant Unknown
language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.
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