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Irrelevance

Burning the edges of your mind
Slow cut, feminine smudges of redemption
Feeding the curiosity devouring your conscious

Catapulted allegations of fictitious sincerity
Raping blessed pillars of sheer redemption
Scathing the silhouetted remnants of the future

Rolling through scarlet dreams of ecstasy
Black hands of porcelain embracing the unknown
Labyrinths winding through alleged chasity

Reaching out to ignite the unbreakable stagnancy
Tear ducts leaking salvation, drowning curiosity
Oblivion lamented into contorted vastness

Indulgences of prominent  manifestations
Sinking passionately through pores of filth
Pupiless eyes crawling into imaginative

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  • rhetorica gold member
    January 1, 2009

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    Your conglomeration of resplendent locutions is positively overwhelming,the sagaciousness of your own apperception is exorbitantly suppositious,however when these exquisite phraseologies are read cumulatively they make imperceptible acceptation to yours truly

    rhet


    • skyviewexpress
      January 1, 2009
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      Touche my friend. Thank you also. The conglomeration isn't intentional, it's just how I write. I don't mean for them to overwhelm the reader, it's just a habit I guess, but it also defines my writing. Thanks for the comment you smartass.