I hate the way it makes me feel
to know your love just wasn’t real.
I hate that I was such a fool
nothing more than just your tool.
I hate the way you made me hurt
made me feel as low as dirt.
I hate the way I was confused
to find that I had just been used.
I hate the way you didn’t care.
My feelings you just wouldn’t spare.
Author notes
This poem was written for mpommr. I hope this will be helpful for your essay.
Comments
1 - 6 of 6
-
This poem showed a lot of emotion in such few words. Simplicity at it's best and such a relatable emotion. I also like the rhyming, nicely done.
-
-
Thank you
I appreciate you taking the time to let me know what you thought of it. I'm glad you felt the rhyme was nice and the emotion was shown well. It is a shame that so many can relate to this.
-
-
loved this poem! and i can relate
-
-
Thank you
I'm glad you liked it. I'm also very sorry you can relate. Unfortunately there are too many people who would relate to this poem. I don't have many like this. As the author notes indicated it was written for someone looking for poems relating to or about hate. Thanks again.
-
-
Omg
Omg that was amazing brian i loved it lol. I love your writing keep it up.
your poem reminds me of a relationship that i was in Iwas jut used and it hurt me alot. -
-
Thank you
I'm glad you liked it so much. I've not written much darker poetry like this. When I was asked by mpommr about poems containing or about hate I pointed them in the right direction and offered to write something dealing with it. I came up with three. Unfortunately it was based on one or more past relationships. I'm sorry that it reminds you of a relationship. Thanks again.
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 6 of 6
